bringmethesun
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- Apr 7, 2012
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The plot is basically about this girl, who lives within a race of humanoids, who look like humans but are all beautiful, smart, fast, strong, and agile. I was thinking about calling them "Unnaturals". The main character's father's always wanted her to become a soldier (soldiers hunt humans, because they want to rid the earth of their race), and so she tries to make him proud by training since she was young. But while out on a mission she's captured by humans, and they keep her as a prisoner. she meets a boy there, who makes her question whether or not she's going to call her people for help. I was going to add in some interesting twists, which I still have to kind figure out.
Please tell me what you think, give me any criticism or ideas.
The main character is Estela, if you have a better name suggestion please let me know
Also please help me try to figure out what the Unnaturals should call the humans, because just saying "humans" sounds weird, i think xD
thanks!
(PS- there's a LOT more to it, but unfortunately it's too much to type out (like how the humanoids came to be, etc) & people will scroll right over it & not read it, so i just shortened the plot.)
Please tell me what you think, give me any criticism or ideas.
The main character is Estela, if you have a better name suggestion please let me know
Also please help me try to figure out what the Unnaturals should call the humans, because just saying "humans" sounds weird, i think xD
thanks!
(PS- there's a LOT more to it, but unfortunately it's too much to type out (like how the humanoids came to be, etc) & people will scroll right over it & not read it, so i just shortened the plot.)