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So if you answered my question about the names then know that Athena Morial is the one i went with, so thank you.
these are my characters so far, but i really need some help, after all im the one writing not reading. I would love some input on how you think they should look and what their back-story's are. i want this to be very really and a little bit tragic in the beginning. it is a supernatural book, aimed for the teen demographic. tell me if you hate the characters or love them!
Verona detin- (chi) princess, or so she seems. Really a down to earth amazing karate kid and gymnast. Can pull any move without the need of help or preparation.
Derek Monroe- (elementor) bad boy, with the ability to control the elements. Sometimes he gets a little wild, and he loves his motor-cycle.
James rock- (clairvoyance/pryokinesis) jock, however it can be hard sometimes. Whatever he touches he feels every last detail of said objects life. Even sometimes the people who’ve held it. And he hears things from the spirit world, its good he figured that out early, or he’d be in a mental institute.
Athena Morial- (all around) normal and boring, or so people think. She has to deal with a hell of a lot of different powers, she doesn’t have any idea how many or what powers she has yet. She just goes with what she gets.
Carmon love- (pre/post-cognition) artist, that’s all she’s known for, if she’s known at all. she can see into a persons past and present just by looking into their eyes.
Hunter West- (telepathy) smarty, or can he just know what the answer is. He hears everyone’s thoughts around him, so he tries to shut everyone out.
THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE HELP!
these are my characters so far, but i really need some help, after all im the one writing not reading. I would love some input on how you think they should look and what their back-story's are. i want this to be very really and a little bit tragic in the beginning. it is a supernatural book, aimed for the teen demographic. tell me if you hate the characters or love them!
Verona detin- (chi) princess, or so she seems. Really a down to earth amazing karate kid and gymnast. Can pull any move without the need of help or preparation.
Derek Monroe- (elementor) bad boy, with the ability to control the elements. Sometimes he gets a little wild, and he loves his motor-cycle.
James rock- (clairvoyance/pryokinesis) jock, however it can be hard sometimes. Whatever he touches he feels every last detail of said objects life. Even sometimes the people who’ve held it. And he hears things from the spirit world, its good he figured that out early, or he’d be in a mental institute.
Athena Morial- (all around) normal and boring, or so people think. She has to deal with a hell of a lot of different powers, she doesn’t have any idea how many or what powers she has yet. She just goes with what she gets.
Carmon love- (pre/post-cognition) artist, that’s all she’s known for, if she’s known at all. she can see into a persons past and present just by looking into their eyes.
Hunter West- (telepathy) smarty, or can he just know what the answer is. He hears everyone’s thoughts around him, so he tries to shut everyone out.
THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE HELP!