HI, I'm 17 and I just got into writing, I had this story in my head for so long but I never got it into paper and I need some help in whether it's possible?
Ok the story is 20 yrs into the future in New York city. The city is corrupt, dirty, streets are filling with political posters and there is a new ban to smoking(cigarettes are illegal), porn(all) and prostitution (yeah I know it's illegal).We're also still in war with afghan and ww3 is about to abrupt.
Character 1 is a 19-20 year old male college student who's part of the "student rebellion'(they riot and protest against the police&gov so the gov would pump money into schools and other gov't run programs instead of the military).Character 2 is a 19-20 yr male college student whose father is a corrupt government official who run's a prostitution rink on the side and sells guns&drugs to some of the students. Char.2 also gets into the family business.Character 3 is a girl living in poverty who works as a intern for character2's father.
So I was wondering if this story is possible? It feels like too much is going on?What should I change so it'll make more sense?
I mean make it less dramatic
Ok the story is 20 yrs into the future in New York city. The city is corrupt, dirty, streets are filling with political posters and there is a new ban to smoking(cigarettes are illegal), porn(all) and prostitution (yeah I know it's illegal).We're also still in war with afghan and ww3 is about to abrupt.
Character 1 is a 19-20 year old male college student who's part of the "student rebellion'(they riot and protest against the police&gov so the gov would pump money into schools and other gov't run programs instead of the military).Character 2 is a 19-20 yr male college student whose father is a corrupt government official who run's a prostitution rink on the side and sells guns&drugs to some of the students. Char.2 also gets into the family business.Character 3 is a girl living in poverty who works as a intern for character2's father.
So I was wondering if this story is possible? It feels like too much is going on?What should I change so it'll make more sense?
I mean make it less dramatic