AishaElizabeth
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Here is Chapter 2
http://www.booksie.com/romance/novel/aishaelizabeth/nightwood-saga:-fangs-1/chapter/2
Here are some questions....
1. Would you buy Nightwood Saga: Fangs if I released it as a real book?
2. Do you think that the book is too short? Should I add some new scenes? And if so where do you feel it needs them?
3. Is there anything in the book that you think goes too fast? Scenes, places, etc?
4. Are there any characters that you would like me to explain more of their history, life, loves?
I do NOT want your opinion on vampire stories. I want your advice on what I should keep and what I should change. So please dont tell me that it is too much like Mortal Instruments or Twilight. Because I will just give you a thumbs down. This is a story that I am going to be publishing on create space for my family, friends and anyone else who would like to buy it. If you dont know what I mean by Constructive Crit then look at my last post. Jess knew what I wanted and she delivered.
Right now the book is 161 and thanks to Jess I will be adding more scenes to make it longer.
http://www.booksie.com/romance/novel/aishaelizabeth/nightwood-saga:-fangs-1/chapter/2
Here are some questions....
1. Would you buy Nightwood Saga: Fangs if I released it as a real book?
2. Do you think that the book is too short? Should I add some new scenes? And if so where do you feel it needs them?
3. Is there anything in the book that you think goes too fast? Scenes, places, etc?
4. Are there any characters that you would like me to explain more of their history, life, loves?
I do NOT want your opinion on vampire stories. I want your advice on what I should keep and what I should change. So please dont tell me that it is too much like Mortal Instruments or Twilight. Because I will just give you a thumbs down. This is a story that I am going to be publishing on create space for my family, friends and anyone else who would like to buy it. If you dont know what I mean by Constructive Crit then look at my last post. Jess knew what I wanted and she delivered.
Right now the book is 161 and thanks to Jess I will be adding more scenes to make it longer.