Funinthesunttt
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Come one, come all and see the amazing corridor
Watch as you see the hall stretch for miles and miles only to wonder, at the pit of your stomach, what is waiting at the dark end of the hall?
Maybe, the unchained beast you’ve kept hidden in your head
Haunting isn’t it? The chill you feel surrounded by black satin walls that lead only to despair.
There are no exits, only entrances
Each door looks the same, but do they lead to the same place?
Try door number 1 and watch as the darkest fears of your mind come to life.
What’s behind door number 2?
Perhaps it leads to door number 3?
I must be mistaken for it leads back to the corridor
Do not fret my audience for this is part of door number 4
We have yet to explore what’s lurking inside door number 5
Are you ready to see what’s waiting of the other side?
Brace yourself and turn the knob slowly for the shadows that lurk within will pull you in swiftly.
Monsters and other fierce creatures of the heart will pull and tear you so quickly apart
You can try to escape, but please know this there is no end down the corridors of my dread…
I know it needs work, but honest answers please. How does the poem make u feel?
Watch as you see the hall stretch for miles and miles only to wonder, at the pit of your stomach, what is waiting at the dark end of the hall?
Maybe, the unchained beast you’ve kept hidden in your head
Haunting isn’t it? The chill you feel surrounded by black satin walls that lead only to despair.
There are no exits, only entrances
Each door looks the same, but do they lead to the same place?
Try door number 1 and watch as the darkest fears of your mind come to life.
What’s behind door number 2?
Perhaps it leads to door number 3?
I must be mistaken for it leads back to the corridor
Do not fret my audience for this is part of door number 4
We have yet to explore what’s lurking inside door number 5
Are you ready to see what’s waiting of the other side?
Brace yourself and turn the knob slowly for the shadows that lurk within will pull you in swiftly.
Monsters and other fierce creatures of the heart will pull and tear you so quickly apart
You can try to escape, but please know this there is no end down the corridors of my dread…
I know it needs work, but honest answers please. How does the poem make u feel?