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The party held by the Capulets is where it all began. This masquerade event was where Romeo and Juliet met, and from there on they were engineers of their own tragic misfortune. Their sudden and short-lived love lead to a fatal end for both Romeo and Juliet, and other members in Verona. Some may say that they had no way to avoid the tragic ending, but if their journey to love had not existed there would have been no tragic ending.
The party held by the Capulets is where it all began. This masquerade event was where Romeo and Juliet met, and from there on they were engineers of their own tragic misfortune. Their sudden and short-lived love lead to a fatal end for both Romeo and Juliet, and other members in Verona. Some may say that they had no way to avoid the tragic ending, but if their journey to love had not existed there would have been no tragic ending.