JordanTurner
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- Jun 20, 2010
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ok i have theories for and designs for an invention i came up with. of course its fictional but believable to any reader. it is a machine, possibly a suit, that can alter time. it isnt a regular time machine, rather it changes time around objects and the universe. it can freeze time for everything but the owner, allowing him to evade enemies and they wont know how he vanished. it also slows time, and reverses it, all for short moments but for military dominance and purpose. the idea uses the combined efforts of portals, wormholes and clever scientific thinking.
the machine was made and created and tested(or yet to be tested) in a secret - so secret that only they know about themselves, company hidden undergroun far from civilization. they stay secret because their purpose is so unusually inhumane and yet sinisterly attractive the government wouldnt know what to make of it. but it wouldnt be pretty.
they organization lives in a huge facility underground that runs very deep and very wide. it has all sorts of high tech inventions but this is the acme of their work. they have departments for all the workers and it is very cool, shall we say.
i think maybe the plot bases around the organization not only becoming known to the world but the danger they bring with them. they may start to sell these suits or machines to the military through false identities so that the company (InSight) cannot be traced. the point could be that using the suit creates maybe a lot of radiation, or effects the universe in many unforeseen ways like matter near the usage point turns into antimatter because it loses its passage in normal time flow, or maybe this is just for reversed matter.
the story would be about the world being eaten by the destruction and chaos of black holes etc, and it could be about those trying to find safety and surviving. or maybe it could be like the company wrecked the world, now someone has to use this suit across the abandoned planet with a team trying to erase al of this and get enough power to reverse the timeline using this machine and sort things out before it all goes wrong. it could flick back and forth between when it was about to go wrong, and when people are trying to turn back time.
the effects may have also sent out lots of radation affecting plants and illnesses, but this all needs to slot together nicely.
if it was a flick-between times story, there needs to be some revealed twist from the earlier time to explain something huge and unexplained.
any ideas that spring to mind?
the other half of the plot would be sort of the realisation of what this company does.
i havent decided what they do, or what horrible deeds they do to do it. the company have to be thinking they are doing GOOD, but the method is bad. to other people. they dont see the greater good, and it never comes anyway.
thoughts? suggestions, any ideas that u have come up with while reading?
the machine was made and created and tested(or yet to be tested) in a secret - so secret that only they know about themselves, company hidden undergroun far from civilization. they stay secret because their purpose is so unusually inhumane and yet sinisterly attractive the government wouldnt know what to make of it. but it wouldnt be pretty.
they organization lives in a huge facility underground that runs very deep and very wide. it has all sorts of high tech inventions but this is the acme of their work. they have departments for all the workers and it is very cool, shall we say.
i think maybe the plot bases around the organization not only becoming known to the world but the danger they bring with them. they may start to sell these suits or machines to the military through false identities so that the company (InSight) cannot be traced. the point could be that using the suit creates maybe a lot of radiation, or effects the universe in many unforeseen ways like matter near the usage point turns into antimatter because it loses its passage in normal time flow, or maybe this is just for reversed matter.
the story would be about the world being eaten by the destruction and chaos of black holes etc, and it could be about those trying to find safety and surviving. or maybe it could be like the company wrecked the world, now someone has to use this suit across the abandoned planet with a team trying to erase al of this and get enough power to reverse the timeline using this machine and sort things out before it all goes wrong. it could flick back and forth between when it was about to go wrong, and when people are trying to turn back time.
the effects may have also sent out lots of radation affecting plants and illnesses, but this all needs to slot together nicely.
if it was a flick-between times story, there needs to be some revealed twist from the earlier time to explain something huge and unexplained.
any ideas that spring to mind?
the other half of the plot would be sort of the realisation of what this company does.
i havent decided what they do, or what horrible deeds they do to do it. the company have to be thinking they are doing GOOD, but the method is bad. to other people. they dont see the greater good, and it never comes anyway.
thoughts? suggestions, any ideas that u have come up with while reading?