how have i done in my first attempt of making a funny light humoured cartoon and

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animation? please advise? Hello

i need some advice...
for a long time i wanted to write my own scrift and preferably get my cartoon up.

im a big fan of beavis and buthhead and family and south park..
i feel with cartoons there are no salries to pay for actors and one can go to extremes with animations ie...flying cars or monsters..

i came across some software last week and managed to rustle up a 10 min cartoon ( i will shorten it to blocks of 1.5/2mins each) when i put it on youtube......

but i need some honest feedback on what i have down and the way i have installed jokes ...... 70% of my jokes are from the net old school jokes over 30 yr old, i have just compacted lots of jokes and built a story around it..

pls pls i need advice ......pos feedback andpolite critiscism... thanks

please see the link below (if it is to long for you to watch please fast forward it as you wish........very light humour cartoon - one swear word - shXt ! )


http://www.xtranormal.com/watch/8275241/

many thanks
areena666
 
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