How should I phrase my sales email?

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JamesandJ

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I'm trying to sell tickets to a business seminar. It's about optimising your website in order to build a stronger online presence.

I am sending an email to 12,000 addresses in my sector. I have 2 questions:

. what should be in the subject line in order to grab their attention and not make them delete the email?
. What should the top line of my email be? something catchy!

Thanks.
 
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mrpickle

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MONEY TO BE MADE.

Limited seminar tickets available to learn how to access hidden revenue sources not yet tapped from your on-line presence...
 
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mrpickle

New member
MONEY TO BE MADE.

Limited seminar tickets available to learn how to access hidden revenue sources not yet tapped from your on-line presence...
 
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