How to make this prophecy I'm writing for a book better?

[aly]

The Prophecy is
Daughter Of The Sea And Son Of The Dead
Shall Listen To What A Very Wise Parent Has Said
Great Friends Will Soon Become Lovers
Which the goddess of love covers
The Sirens Shall Surprise Your Visit
With A Very Surprising End, Or Is It??
Thank you

 

[Zman]

You think you can?? It honestly already sounds pretty great.

...I kinda really wanna read this book now. You have peaked my curiosity