Something about this sounds... clunky? I'm not sure how to rewrite it, though. Any help would be really appreciated. Thanks!
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You are unique. You are talented. You have a bright future ahead of you.
Whenever you start to think those depressing thoughts, just remember: Your sadness is kind of like a dark cloud. Your bright future, then, is the sun. When the clouds stop the sun from shining, does the sun cease to exist? Nope. Even if we can't see it, it's still there. We just have to wait for the clouds to pass, and the sun will shine brighter than ever before.
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You are unique. You are talented. You have a bright future ahead of you.
Whenever you start to think those depressing thoughts, just remember: Your sadness is kind of like a dark cloud. Your bright future, then, is the sun. When the clouds stop the sun from shining, does the sun cease to exist? Nope. Even if we can't see it, it's still there. We just have to wait for the clouds to pass, and the sun will shine brighter than ever before.