suitable for intended audience.? My story has a "Daemon" [Daemons are good or malevolent "supernatural beings between mortals and gods, such as inferior divinities and ghosts of dead heroes" and differ from the Judeo-Christian usage of demon, a malignant spirit that can seduce, afflict, or possess humans.], but has the looks of the Judeo-Christian demon.
The story features a young man between the age of 20 and 25 named Blake. He has slick, cobalt blue hair. It is a supernatural story where he hunts perpetrators that have committed crimes against the weak, women, and children. He wears the usual gothic clothing and wields a katana.
Problem: this story was supposed to written for young adults, but the content and crimes are becoming too violent i.e. abuse, rape, violence.
Another Problem is: How do differentiate between this good Daemon and the bad evil spirits in this story?
The Hero is supposed to be detached and calculating as opposed to his partner.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2843663/1/Anger_Personified
The story features a young man between the age of 20 and 25 named Blake. He has slick, cobalt blue hair. It is a supernatural story where he hunts perpetrators that have committed crimes against the weak, women, and children. He wears the usual gothic clothing and wields a katana.
Problem: this story was supposed to written for young adults, but the content and crimes are becoming too violent i.e. abuse, rape, violence.
Another Problem is: How do differentiate between this good Daemon and the bad evil spirits in this story?
The Hero is supposed to be detached and calculating as opposed to his partner.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2843663/1/Anger_Personified