i wrote this poem, what do you think?

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I wish I was enough,
enough for you to see
that there’s light in every corner
though it’s hard to believe.

I wish I was enough,
enough to fill the hole
so that when you heart is breaking
I can play the fixing role.

I wish I was enough
enough despite the rain
constant showers might get you down
but I’ll help you through the pain.

Sadly I now realize,
no matter what I do
Im just not enough
I’ll never be enough for you.

All my heart and all my soul,
I’d give you everything,
but sadly its not enough.
Oh how I wish I was enough
 
it would make beautiful lyrics to a song! jus sayin. haha:) but i like it.
 
One big rule from my career as a writing student is that emotions have to be true. Real life is as interesting as you make it. The theory behind that poem is quite good, and it flows well, but make sure you're not whining. all in all, I'd like to read more!
 
beautiful...so true.
*sigh.
sometimes we are not enough for some people.
 
it would be nice to a man that was sympathetic to his loved one !
 
Cry me a freaking river. I'm so tired of depressing people. Don't get me wrong; it's not bad, but be more positive. So what if you aren't good enough for someone? Maybe they don't deserve you.
 
beautiful~
very deep-would be a nice song if you think about it :P
 
Omw gal!! I think it is B-E-A-UTIFUL!!! Thats very, very good and sweet...u go gal!! Please, please let me know when you write another 1! I LOVE IT...
 
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