i wrote this rap about 20-30 min ago ust wanna see if i can get a few more replies?

xxcessiv

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ight so when the playaz take the field and they spit out there lyrycism-

i take the field as a ref and let em getta taste of critisism--

cuz they know that flow derives from the way u deliver---

your lyrics can be hot n burnin or can be so cold they make u shiver--

me ima heavy hitter but i really gotta tell ya---

that when i battle i spit witout a beat emcees call it acepella---

but i call it spittin i dont use technical terms-----

the lyrics oh so hot it makes u wonder how chemicals burn---

well its easy and simple get out paper and pencil---

lyrics plus flow equal the heat that makes the mic sizzle----

fo shizzle...like jay-z's H to the izzo-----

ill catch a 2 yard pass like jerry rice and take 80 yards into the inzone-

aint noone betta than that of which there limits cant exceed---

unless it wasnt really there limits its just satan doin evil deeds--

plantin little seeds to make you feel like ur worthless-----

but hey u can be somebody to if im able to work this-----



yo its the boii x-cessive straight outa SD lovin the westcoast...if u liked this hit me up on myspace or whateva...its not a muzic myspace but im plannin on recordin soon so ya hit me up if u got connects....
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