I'm currently writing a fantasy book but I have a concern regarding the romance

RavinD

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portion of it.? I would greatly appreciate some input on how to make it have a hint of romance. I've had several people read what I have already and they really liked it. Mostly mostly friends that are girls. But I could use some fresh eyes and help with some suggestions.

There is a link to the book below. You can just read the description or read the story in your own time. Thank you so much! =)

http://bookmato.com/Book/1423-journey-of-an-exile-path-to-redemption.aspx
 
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