I'm writing a novel. i need advice on my plot help?

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Jean couldn't help thinking of "The Godfather." Was Anna about to make an offer she couldn't refuse? Maybe not, yet Anna intimidation worked. How had she known where to find her. Was she stalking her?
"If you haven’t figured it out," Anna said, "I’m the one who took the pictures of you and Johnny. "
Jean took a deep breath before answering. "What?"
"I wanted Catherine to hate you so you would leave town." Anna's sat back appearing smug.
"What exactly do you want?"
"Before you came for your little vacation, I was her best friend."
I am done withthe chaper I need to rewrie this i dont kno how to make iit better. do u?
 
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