character feel inspired to be strong? (she is a victim from being sexually harrased and she is depressed cuz she lost her best friend and her lovers)
She sat dried eyed and all cried out. Jean didn’t want to shed another tear. She cried too much, she cried over Johnny, B, Catherine, and her grandfather. She felt stronger in California. There she never felt weak; she always fought back and always got the last word during petty fights. She took a long breath and turned to hug her pillow.
(dont worry im not going to say rewrite this because I like how this sounds. but if u dont say y. wjat would u add to add action?)
(grandfather died years ago
bestfriend ended friendship
b and johnny is forbidden to see her)
She sat dried eyed and all cried out. Jean didn’t want to shed another tear. She cried too much, she cried over Johnny, B, Catherine, and her grandfather. She felt stronger in California. There she never felt weak; she always fought back and always got the last word during petty fights. She took a long breath and turned to hug her pillow.
(dont worry im not going to say rewrite this because I like how this sounds. but if u dont say y. wjat would u add to add action?)
(grandfather died years ago
bestfriend ended friendship
b and johnny is forbidden to see her)