Im writing an extremely short letter to my friend out of state, will you

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Spiritually Speaking: Why can Muslims dish it out but not take it?

Seriously, why is it all right for Muslims (I'm not saying all Muslims, but some of them do) to bash every other religion, but it is not all right to criticize Islam?
Emma, you don't see Chrisitians killing someone for a drawing of Jesus. You don't see Hindus stoning someone to death for being naked in public.
 
proof read it for me? 10Pts in 1Hr!!? Hi Im writing a letter to a friend I only get to see once a year. I am sending her some money to spend on her kids, since im not local and cant do it there. She has 3 boys and lives 14 hours away with her husband. I miss her so much, can you proof read this, and tell me what I can add that would sound ((heart felt)) and sincerely sweet?? Im not good with words, this is why I need you creative writers!!

In 1 Hr i'll choose best answer! Promise! I have excellent yahoo history. Thanks for your help!!
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Hi Crystal,
Miss you lots! Since I cant be with you right now, please accept my wishes for a beautiful Fall & Winter for you and all your family. I wish I were there to treat your boys to some ice cream along with a few cute new sweaters for the coming months, but since I cant be there, would you be my shopper and get something they’ll like? I’ve enclosed an amount that should help, if even just a little. If last year’s photographer is still around, It would be a pleasure to do another round of photos to capture you all for the Fall 2010 season. I’ll look for their phone number and get a hold of them in October and hopefully we can set up a photo shoot with the 3 cutest boys around. Love you guys <3
Xoxo Sandra,
I love to see you smile
Will you help me re-word what needs to be done? What should I change, or what are more heartfelt words I can add? I only see them maybe once a year, and I talk to her about once a month.
 
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