proof read it for me? 10Pts in 1Hr!!? Hi Im writing a letter to a friend I only get to see once a year. I am sending her some money to spend on her kids, since im not local and cant do it there. She has 3 boys and lives 14 hours away with her husband. I miss her so much, can you proof read this, and tell me what I can add that would sound ((heart felt)) and sincerely sweet?? Im not good with words, this is why I need you creative writers!!
In 1 Hr i'll choose best answer! Promise! I have excellent yahoo history. Thanks for your help!!
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Hi Crystal,
Miss you lots! Since I cant be with you right now, please accept my wishes for a beautiful Fall & Winter for you and all your family. I wish I were there to treat your boys to some ice cream along with a few cute new sweaters for the coming months, but since I cant be there, would you be my shopper and get something they’ll like? I’ve enclosed an amount that should help, if even just a little. If last year’s photographer is still around, It would be a pleasure to do another round of photos to capture you all for the Fall 2010 season. I’ll look for their phone number and get a hold of them in October and hopefully we can set up a photo shoot with the 3 cutest boys around. Love you guys <3
Xoxo Sandra,
I love to see you smile
Will you help me re-word what needs to be done? What should I change, or what are more heartfelt words I can add? I only see them maybe once a year, and I talk to her about once a month.