Is this a good ending to a short story?

rosa

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“Troy?” Rose asked. As Troy looked at her he felt a sudden uproar of mixed emotions make their way throughout his body. “Rose?” Troy also asked. “What... you ...here,” he stammered. They looked into each other’s eyes. A thick heavy tension fell. The air became stuffy. What was once a deep passionate love between Rose and Troy slowly faded into the darkness. Suddenly, they sensed the eeriness and danger of their surroundings. That was when out of the shadows a knife slowly rose ready to plunge.
 
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