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This is for my college personal statement essay. Please help me get it better!
Prompt #1: The world I came from (my family, friends, and neighborhood) and how the world shaped my dreams and goals.
My dad use to tell me that writing is just another, different language that I will have to use everyday, and maybe like doing writing everyday in my life…and he was right. When I was eight or nine years old, I began writing fiction stories and then poems, and I am still writing today. My stories revolve around the supernatural and romance genre but I also put in reality in my stories. I use personal experiences in my life and put it into my stories. But I also use it in my poems. My poems are about expressing different emotions that I see and feel in my own eyes and in my own heart. My poems also reflect my feelings in love, friendship, and pain. I began writing these different poems because of the effect on me since my parent’s divorce. I have been posting my poems on a website called www.poemhunter.com and here is an example of one of my poems called “My Journal.”
Please help! And if there is any words or sentences that need to be corrected, please tell me!
You don't have to write it out for me but I need to know which sentence or word needs to be fixed. or does it make any sense? I really want this essay to be excellent for college
Prompt #1: The world I came from (my family, friends, and neighborhood) and how the world shaped my dreams and goals.
My dad use to tell me that writing is just another, different language that I will have to use everyday, and maybe like doing writing everyday in my life…and he was right. When I was eight or nine years old, I began writing fiction stories and then poems, and I am still writing today. My stories revolve around the supernatural and romance genre but I also put in reality in my stories. I use personal experiences in my life and put it into my stories. But I also use it in my poems. My poems are about expressing different emotions that I see and feel in my own eyes and in my own heart. My poems also reflect my feelings in love, friendship, and pain. I began writing these different poems because of the effect on me since my parent’s divorce. I have been posting my poems on a website called www.poemhunter.com and here is an example of one of my poems called “My Journal.”
Please help! And if there is any words or sentences that need to be corrected, please tell me!
You don't have to write it out for me but I need to know which sentence or word needs to be fixed. or does it make any sense? I really want this essay to be excellent for college