Is this a good introduction ?

[Natchi]

Hi guys , i have to write a discursive essay about the benefits and drawbacks of modern technology , do u thiink this is a good intro and if u want u can add points or edit it a bit

While some people agree to that technology has built up the society to what it is today in many ways ,shapes and forms, others at the same time not all share this view .It is debated by researchers that it has made things worse .Technology can be useful to a certain extent in which it may inform , educate and entertain people, yet not always in a positive manner.

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[john]

Technology: Lets talk about it.
First: One could say our lives
have been made much easier but at what cost?
Second: Still others complain there's too much tech and should be controlled or eliminated, why?
Third: In the near future will our lust for technology outstrip our
natural resources? What can we do?