Greetings all, I have decided to write my own book and I just started on Chapter One. As a Christmas treat, I am going to share the first page of Chapter One, which I just started writing last night. I just wanted a few opinions on it and I want to see if you want to know more. This is only the rough draft.
Chapter I
As I silently cried from the darkness of my room, I sat upon my grandfather's old chair before the window, staring cold and motion-less at the heavy, cold snow cautiously falling from beneath the dimly-lit sky. It was as if the snow was purposely taking its time to hit the ground, as if it wanted me to feel the unbearable pain one wouldn't want to ever feel. After all of this time, I knew what I have been doing was wrong. How could I be so selfish? So greedy? So foolish? I knew exactly what I was doing, and yet I did not seem to care about anyone but myself. I sat before the window, hopeless, depressed, and sleep-deprived. If only I have been more thoughtful of the others who died before me. Maybe then would my life be not so excruciating and maybe then life would be so different, so much happier, so much easier to live through. If only I have not been so ignorant, maybe then would they still be alive.
Chapter I
As I silently cried from the darkness of my room, I sat upon my grandfather's old chair before the window, staring cold and motion-less at the heavy, cold snow cautiously falling from beneath the dimly-lit sky. It was as if the snow was purposely taking its time to hit the ground, as if it wanted me to feel the unbearable pain one wouldn't want to ever feel. After all of this time, I knew what I have been doing was wrong. How could I be so selfish? So greedy? So foolish? I knew exactly what I was doing, and yet I did not seem to care about anyone but myself. I sat before the window, hopeless, depressed, and sleep-deprived. If only I have been more thoughtful of the others who died before me. Maybe then would my life be not so excruciating and maybe then life would be so different, so much happier, so much easier to live through. If only I have not been so ignorant, maybe then would they still be alive.