Is This A Good Story Plot?

[AnneMarie]

Title: Scarlet Cube

Genre: Horror, Gore, Comedy, Fantasy, Supernatural

Plot:
Scarlet Cube takes place not to far in the future, where demons now walk in the human realm without giving a care, possessing those who stand in their way, and reeking havoc everywhere they go. Jovi, a young girl who doesn't believe in these creatures known as ''demons'', and gets possessed by one by the name of ''Scarlet Cube'', one of the most powerful demons known to man, mainly known as the great ''Blood Demon''. By getting herself possessed, she now has horror - like powers that let her control her own blood, for example, creating weapons from her blood to kill, eat and drink the blood from other demons. It is now her job to eat and drink the blood from other demons to break her connection from the demon ''Scarlet Cube'', and turn back into a normal person again.

 

[Cecil]

i would say it has alot of potential, perhaps you should consider the growth of the character since a good story's main character always starts out weak and become insanely strong. Also, you could make the more "sinful" areas on earth contain tougher demons. Overall, i would say it has a nice plot.

 

[KelvinL]

This is by far the best original story i read on yahoo! answers

 

[Haileigh]

It sounds more like something my brother would like to read. I usually like futuristic stuff, but it doesn't seem like it would interest me very much.