Is this a really good joke for standup?

[Gronyoolan]

So this tall guy walks up to me. The guy bumps into me. He's too tall to see me. So I look up at him and say "hey buddy! Watch where you're going!" He looks down at me and apologizes. I said "It's ok, just be more caerful next time."

 

[benice]

Who many ids do you have in y/a

 

[Sumdude]

Nothing funny there. It would be a correct, polite response and interchange.

 

[Animesh]

Its really good joke buddy..