is this good for a sad story???? i need answers!?

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When my life just couldn't get better by nikki
Sorry not perfect I typed really fast. Grammar yea I know

When u wake up usually u think,what time is it. Or. When's breakfast. But today was. Where r they. What happened
Yesterday my family John and Noelle my parents and my little sister Jamie. Were going to palm springs for a family vacation. when dad was telling us a joke flapping his arms along with him. A moving truck moving in our lane by accident smashed the front of the car. I got out then tried to save Jamie. My parents were already dead I could smell blood coming from the front Jamie ended up dying in the hospital that night because of 1 broken leg and a broken neck. She didn't survive the surgery. I had to get surgery on my hand because the glass had cut me pretty bad.
Flash back dream
Dad was going on about some chicken jokes. One of the last ones he said was" why did the chicken crossed the road?" he said while flapping his arms. My dad is 40. Very handsome. For a forty year old. He has Jett black hair and bight sky blue eyes. Which I inherited with my brown hair I inherited from my mom. My mom is dead before this happened. She ended up dying with cancer. He married a girl named noelle she was on her way to become a fashion artist. Either way she was very pretty.
Jamie answered the question...." to get the the other side!" squealing with joy. Jamie is 6 give her a break. Well she ended up being wrong. My dad usually lies bout he answers, because he wants to be correct, which is fine with me. Which was not obvious.hint my sarcasm. I love my Sis to death but. Common! seconds later a trucks headlights were coming at us from straight Ahead. before I could say "watch out" all I got to was " wa!!!!" then a loud smash. I tried to save Jamie but the ambulance were already on their way.
End of dream.
2 weeks later
I've been on and off because of the accident. I am still in the hospital. We are going to have to funeral next Tuesday. Well I'm Vicki. I have Jett black hair, bright sky blue eyes, nerdy.... And well lonely altogether. School had already started and I'm going in tomorrow. My subjects are. 1 English 2 P.E. 3 history 4 advanced math 5 advanced science 6 music 7 free period.
I was surprised by the last one that means i can go to home early. Well right now I'm living with my uncle. He is only 30. He looks just like my dad except younger. I miss them dearly. Right now is winter break it's almost over. I didn't have Christmas because of the accident. In 5 weeks my uncle said I will be able to see palm springs. Because I never got to see it.
School morning
I got let out last night. The stitches hurt like I've been stabbed multiple times. I got dressed by myself. All in black. I don't care about my life anymore. I'm alone on the big world. I'm going to high school At kings high. I'm 16. I hope I make no friends because that means liking which ends to loving which leads to losing the ones you love. I can't afford to love again. After what has happened I just can't........


OK SO IS IT GOOD FOR A SAD BOOK. IN CLASS WE R SUPPOSED TO RIGHT A TRAUMATIZING STORY. SO I NEED AN OPINION. I KNOW MY GRAMMAR SUCKS I'M ON A IPOD SO YEAH IT'S HARD TO TYPE.
NIKKI. ;)
Sorry for the short words like u and r. I needed to finish
I WILL FINISH THE STORY AND I WILL POST IT ! Thank ya


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