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I'm writing a book, and if anyone is so inclined could use some technical advice.?
The book I’m writing is fictional. The two lead characters are having a fight; relationship bf and gf. He has 22 years Brazilian Jujutsu and she 15 years Kempo Ryu Karate. Obviously he is going to win the fight. Here’s my problem. I spoken to a couple of people that he’s just going to walk up to her and it’s all over. I know he’s way more experienced, but is she just going to let him throw her around like a rag doll and have ABOUSTLY POSITIVELY no chance to defend herself? Here’s the quick set up….she doesn’t recognize him. As far as she is concerned he has done something to or with her boyfriend; and either he talks or she has every intention of killing him…she also has a hatchet. He doesn’t want to hurt her of course, and he understands completely why she doesn’t recognize him. He’s trying to talk to her, but she’s having none of it. In fact the more he talks the more pissed off she gets. So has to disarm her, control her, and then get her to a mirror about 12 feet away and obviously she has to be conscious when he gets her to it. There are 3 things making this very difficult. #1) They haven’t seen each other in 20 years, so he gets a surprise when he first approaches her. He had no idea she was studying anything. #2) Emotions aside he can’t afford to injure her because the situation they are in requires them both, to get out of it alive. Having her injured would compromise them both. #3) She is and always has been a very stubborn and determined woman, she doesn’t frighten easily in fact the more something frightens her the more she will challenge it; giving up simply is not in her nature. Oh and the end of the fight needs to have him not ony have her in submission lock, but she won't give in...it's crucial to a later part of the story...
So does anyone have any ideas on how I would choreograph this fight. Help...anyone...and Thanks for taking the time to consider this question.
Thank you Gentleman. I really Appreciate you taking the time to answer the question. You were Both quite helpful Indeed.
I'm writing a book, and if anyone is so inclined could use some technical advice.?
The book I’m writing is fictional. The two lead characters are having a fight; relationship bf and gf. He has 22 years Brazilian Jujutsu and she 15 years Kempo Ryu Karate. Obviously he is going to win the fight. Here’s my problem. I spoken to a couple of people that he’s just going to walk up to her and it’s all over. I know he’s way more experienced, but is she just going to let him throw her around like a rag doll and have ABOUSTLY POSITIVELY no chance to defend herself? Here’s the quick set up….she doesn’t recognize him. As far as she is concerned he has done something to or with her boyfriend; and either he talks or she has every intention of killing him…she also has a hatchet. He doesn’t want to hurt her of course, and he understands completely why she doesn’t recognize him. He’s trying to talk to her, but she’s having none of it. In fact the more he talks the more pissed off she gets. So has to disarm her, control her, and then get her to a mirror about 12 feet away and obviously she has to be conscious when he gets her to it. There are 3 things making this very difficult. #1) They haven’t seen each other in 20 years, so he gets a surprise when he first approaches her. He had no idea she was studying anything. #2) Emotions aside he can’t afford to injure her because the situation they are in requires them both, to get out of it alive. Having her injured would compromise them both. #3) She is and always has been a very stubborn and determined woman, she doesn’t frighten easily in fact the more something frightens her the more she will challenge it; giving up simply is not in her nature. Oh and the end of the fight needs to have him not ony have her in submission lock, but she won't give in...it's crucial to a later part of the story...
So does anyone have any ideas on how I would choreograph this fight. Help...anyone...and Thanks for taking the time to consider this question.
Thank you Gentleman. I really Appreciate you taking the time to answer the question. You were Both quite helpful Indeed.