Naruto fanfiction question?

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KarinaKamichi

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Can someone tell me what you think of my Naruto Fanfiction? Could you please review it? Only one person has told me what I needed to fix, and I fixed it. I need tips on how to make it better. Here's the URL- http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7544354/1/The_Shattered_Mask
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7545875/1/The_Run_Away
 
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