Please check out the short story I've written?

Thread starter pinky
Start date Sep 13, 2009
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check short story written

Sep 13, 2009

pinky

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Chapter 1:
http://www.webook.com/chapter.aspx?p=5bee5d8fa8d0495f94db50a91bd0e26d&pb=a2d02c8f5ca745aca2edae7f622609a9&pt=979dc8ecfe2d43aba59a7cda3407a074

Chapter 2:
http://www.webook.com/chapter.aspx?p=5bee5d8fa8d0495f94db50a91bd0e26d&pb=a2d02c8f5ca745aca2edae7f622609a9&pt=979dc8ecfe2d43aba59a7cda3407a074

I just finished chapter 2.. If anyone has time, please read/review?

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