Supermadzz
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- Feb 24, 2010
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What could I do? The mum's partner yells at her, hits her and stuff. What do you think of this plot PLEASE suggest other ideas if you can.
1 - The family run away from the stepdad, move to a dingy flat.
The story can't be too long, so I want a plot that doesn't need a heap of detail. The one above is what I was thinking, but I can't get it short enough. What do you guys think?
1 - The family run away from the stepdad, move to a dingy flat.
The story can't be too long, so I want a plot that doesn't need a heap of detail. The one above is what I was thinking, but I can't get it short enough. What do you guys think?