Tips on improving my short story introduction?

Ken

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Here is my introduction:
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You backstabbing bitch. I had your back. I held your hand. I told you that I loved you, but in a case of mistaken identity I gave my all to you. You fed your love to me like crums to pigeons on the streets and sometimes I think you're satisfied to see me begging like a dog. At first I was in denial and I bargained with my depression but now I realise those were stages of acceptance that it's really over.
I'm stupid for believing in you.

I slammed down my pen and walked away.
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this introduction is about a guy finding out that his girlfriend was cheating on him. he writes his thoughts down on a piece of paper as a form of therapy of getting over the incident

What do you think?
 
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