what do u think of my poem?

IBsuck

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11/3/2009
Looking back at my day
I feel like going back
And change it every way
I had the worst of luck
Beyond any description I would say

Time is running out
Nothing to be happy about
No one can hear my shout
No one to help me out

I need an urgent delay
The dead line is so close
I have loads to give in today
My random plans will fail
My brain is growing some decay
The school a modern jail

Time is running out
Nothing to be happy about
No one can hear my shout
No one to help me out

I have to finish a 1500 words essay
I go around asking for help
Everyone else is busy
I have to do it on my own
This self-relaying thing is killing me



it can be sang too...hahah :P
school is seriously killing me X(
 
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