What do u thk of my story i know Vamps are vry poplar at the moment so i

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wanted 2rite bout them frm a new angl? What do u thk of my story i know Vamps are vry poplar at the moment so i wanted 2rite bout them frm a new angl?
I know vampires are really popular at the moment and i wanted to write about them but from a new angle(not love, or romance)

So here goes!! hope u like it
I've only done a little and i want ur opinion
BTW I'm only 11 so it ain't gonna be pro standard

Prologue

It was always my sister Rainbow, that had the creepy obsession with vampires. She had hundreds of comics filled with blood and gore.
So why was it me here, now fending off another human being? Relying on their blood to keep me alive.
Chapter One

'Mum!' i shouted, from upstairs. She appeared at the bottom of the stairs. 'What is it honey?' she asked, looking slightly concerned. I showed her. My beautiful, elegant glass cat statue had been shattered to tiny shards of glass, that could cause so much damage, despite their size. 'Oh no!' whispered mum, looking shocked. 'How did that happen'?
I didn't know what to say. The glass cat had been in our family for years. It had been mum's great great grandmothers. I had kept it on my shelf in the room that rainbow and i shared. Mum and dad had decorated it(their style). Meaning floaty curtains and colours.
 
I like it! I think it's really well written, considering you're 11. It left me wanted to read more, which is always the sign of a good story :)
 
very nice, keep going and I'll look for you in the best sellers area in the book store in a couple years! Good luck :-}
 
very nice, keep going and I'll look for you in the best sellers area in the book store in a couple years! Good luck :-}
 
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