what do you think my introduction for my paper on the Mumbai attacks?

Macy

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This is the intro: I need help coming up with at least 130 more words.
Terrorists have taken people hostage. People have been killed in hotels, hospitals, a Jewish center, and train stations. The people in the hotels were trapped. Places were being bombed without a care. There was gunfire being heard by many people, scaring them out of their minds. Over a hundred people were killed in several places in Mumbai, India. After this the question to be asked was who started the attacks. Mumbai extremists started the attacks since; the relationships between Pakistan and India were getting better.
 
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