please comment on the general plot and please feel free to give me any advice thank you
note i have based my plot in a fictoional galaxy
The Eliex: The Book of Time
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john brophy thinks he is a abomination and waste of space in society . he is in a wheelchair he is 15 goin on 16 and has no social life he spends most of his time in his room trying to figure out the same strange dream he has every night.
one day he is caught in a building fire in which his right arm part of his left arm his right eye and ear are blown off. however he wakes up the next morning to find that he is not hurt and he can use his legs. he then begins to receive strange messages from an anonomys person telling him he is in danger. just has he is ambushed he is rescued by the person. he wakes up on a space staion and finds out it was an alien contacting him. he finds out that there is a alien restiance known as the Eliex fighting against another alien villian. john discovers that before he was born he was implanted with the secrets of the universe and that he has the ability of an exodia( flight, mind reading, telepathy and telekinas) .his mother was also an alien which gives him the power of invisibility(the race of his mother had the ability of a chamoleon) he finds out that the villan of the book that i still havent named yet is after a sacred object known has the book of time that will allow the book bearer to write the events of the universe from begining to end. it is up to john to use the imformation in his head to find the wereabouts of the book before the villian uses it to take over the galaxy
i forgot to tell you that the aliens replaced johns broken body after the fire with robot parts
note i have based my plot in a fictoional galaxy
The Eliex: The Book of Time
______________________
john brophy thinks he is a abomination and waste of space in society . he is in a wheelchair he is 15 goin on 16 and has no social life he spends most of his time in his room trying to figure out the same strange dream he has every night.
one day he is caught in a building fire in which his right arm part of his left arm his right eye and ear are blown off. however he wakes up the next morning to find that he is not hurt and he can use his legs. he then begins to receive strange messages from an anonomys person telling him he is in danger. just has he is ambushed he is rescued by the person. he wakes up on a space staion and finds out it was an alien contacting him. he finds out that there is a alien restiance known as the Eliex fighting against another alien villian. john discovers that before he was born he was implanted with the secrets of the universe and that he has the ability of an exodia( flight, mind reading, telepathy and telekinas) .his mother was also an alien which gives him the power of invisibility(the race of his mother had the ability of a chamoleon) he finds out that the villan of the book that i still havent named yet is after a sacred object known has the book of time that will allow the book bearer to write the events of the universe from begining to end. it is up to john to use the imformation in his head to find the wereabouts of the book before the villian uses it to take over the galaxy
i forgot to tell you that the aliens replaced johns broken body after the fire with robot parts