this poem is a response to "The Passionate shepherd to his love" by Christopher Marlowe..
To my dear pasisonate shepherd
I am saying for the record,
your promises are far too bold,
They are unthinkable to hold.
You assured me steep mountain yields,
and for those I would have to bring shields.
You guaranteed a gown of wool,
and for that, i am quite the fool.
You have convinced me to elope,
and with that I will not lose hope,
that the love we have is truly real,
I have to say, I love the feel.
((does that last line make sense?))
Feedback appreciated. school assignment, each line must have eight syllables and rhyme with the last line from the previous sentence.
To my dear pasisonate shepherd
I am saying for the record,
your promises are far too bold,
They are unthinkable to hold.
You assured me steep mountain yields,
and for those I would have to bring shields.
You guaranteed a gown of wool,
and for that, i am quite the fool.
You have convinced me to elope,
and with that I will not lose hope,
that the love we have is truly real,
I have to say, I love the feel.
((does that last line make sense?))
Feedback appreciated. school assignment, each line must have eight syllables and rhyme with the last line from the previous sentence.