I wrote this last night after i watched dawn of the dead it gave me inspiration but i dont know if its good enough its for a girl in my school she is well fit i like her a lot do you think she will like it and please also give me some feetback thank you
Her face, she looks at me
Her eyes, they are so shiny
Like pearls in the sun
I take her hand, its so soft
Like a bald mans head
I say I love you
And she cries with happyness
Her tears are like chocolate
on my lips... oh wait
She is smiling
Can I tell her my secret
That I want to be with her forever
even when she is so old
she will have no teeth left
Frankie I love you so much
I dream about you
Every night and even in the day
You are the most beautiful girl in the world
Her face, she looks at me
Her eyes, they are so shiny
Like pearls in the sun
I take her hand, its so soft
Like a bald mans head
I say I love you
And she cries with happyness
Her tears are like chocolate
on my lips... oh wait
She is smiling
Can I tell her my secret
That I want to be with her forever
even when she is so old
she will have no teeth left
Frankie I love you so much
I dream about you
Every night and even in the day
You are the most beautiful girl in the world
