Whatd do you think of my poem?

rondo

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Like so the oceans
My memories cycle
Up and like waves
Crashing down on my feet
Wet sand and black cloud

She took me to her world
Kissed me
Then left me to sleep
On this counting crescent moon
Blasting out of the night in a tomb

The ants pan around the floor
Wobbling in their brawn
Slowly slipping their destiny by
Dying like waves
Falling in crumbles floating from the shore

She offered me treats
Like bits and slices
Told me she loved me
Like she had flown feathers
From the seashore like birds

The glass crashes
Fractures to fractrals
Divides into everything
And dashes onto the ground
Like breaking waves upon sound

She made me dream
Her fragile dream
Like a blade of glass
Her gentle maddening vein
Rousing from her stary end

The clown then sat
And as the blown winds tide
Frowned upon the flower
In his flowered black frock
Vocalized seconds on the clock
 
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