whats a good introduction for an essay to get accepted in a collegiate academy?

[PabloD]

im gonna be a freshman and the course i want is pychology help me

 

[seekhealthenterprises]

Do what a introduction letter for a writing submission suggests...Begin your letter with,
"When......" It grabs the rseader and puts them into your action. You must do the rest, but it would be good if you have a story about how you came to be interested in this career, school or course of study. (A true personal story works best.)

 

[Upward]

Do not start with "I".

 

[3e14159265358979323846]

I usually start with an anecdote to reel the readers in. For example, since it's about psychology you can talk about the fear of public speaking and how you dealt with it or something. Start off with something descriptive like "Silence befalls in the room, a restless boy squirms in his seat, a man yawns, a curious woman gawks at me, and other eyes follow me as i Nervously walk to the stage." Then go on from there, describe your experience in another two sentences and talk about how that sparked your interest in psychology or something lol