poem

Its my love poem i wrote, its the first time i ever wrote a poem so its not perfect, i would like your ideas, not enouh emotion at the start etc,,, When we first met, I felt overjoyed, i discovered a compassionate human who understands me and who will always be there for me. When i knew i was...

Perseverance In troubled times, I'll see you through I feel the strains, the same pain that you do When you're down, reach for me with all your strength, I won't let go It's you and me, against this world You're never alone, for i am a part of you

TOGETHER WE ONCE WERE- Together we once were, as happy as could be, But luck soon fades, including you and me. I wish It couldn't be so, although I know it's true, And that the last thing that I said, was ''I love you''. The lives we shared together, was so connected, Now the hearts are...

I read a poem by Auden back in college that beautifully captured the filthy sterility of major cities in his time, probably centered on London. I'd like to rediscover it, but I can't find it anymore, I have no idea what it was called, but the word that it most evoked for me was "grey". Does...

i lover her soo much. and she loves me just as much. let me know what you think It started out simple like something new I knew from the beginning there was just something about you. I loved the way you smiled and the way you laughed We were on different roads until the roads came to one...

What More Man Wants I walk in a city, I saw a flower, Trying to survive in this big forest of concrete, Why did everybody ignoring this poor little creature. But, I know even me can’t do anything about this. All I can do is provide it a little water, And watch it. One day, the flower will...

ok. i read this last year. i only know some parts its something about the ocean.... and about mothers and fathers.... and the wind.... there is online in the poem that is repeated at the end of every stnaza that i cant think of..and i would have to say this is the key to the name of the poem...

Unheard tears As they fall from my face these reminders of my deepest despairs disappear in thin air never to be seen or heard from again. Why can’t they take my pain for the ride? Though silent they hold the unspoken candor. They don’t lie they keep secrets like a locked diary. Come and leave...

I would like honest opinions, I need constructive criticism. And so I fall into the night, From this bright and breathless height, From everything within my sight, Into arms that just might. Thanks in advance, Emma

I hope it makes since in all the lines, i mean transitioning from one line to another and the theme is good and the over all peom? Please and Thanx. Title ideas NEEDED? I look to my left, I look to my right Knowing all my dreams are still out of sight I want to live I want to be free But how...

I need to write a love poem for poetry and need a good line to say about someone's smile and their hazel eyes..... ideas?

Dreams turned to death, Voice turned to tears, Love made her forget, Love ended her years. Laughter turned to screams, Life turned to blood, Love wasn't what it seemed, Love just wasn't enough. Hope turned to loneliness, Smile turned to a frown, Love caused this emptiness, Love pushed...

its called:Purpose..............They say that everyone has a purpose.if thats true,thyen whats mine?Dont judge me because i dont have one,because im different.would you like it if i judged you for having one?probley not...

Please explain to me what this poem means. Does she not fear death? Please summarize for me. Thank you~! Because I could not stop for Death- He kindly stopped for me- The Carriage held but just Ourselves- And Immortality.We slowly drove-He knew no haste And I had put away My labor and my...

Part of Me I walk along the beach, I heard a beautiful sound of the waves, I witness the beautiful nature, I touch the soft sand. It would be great if I can be a part of nature, It would be nice if my house is by the beach, It would be good if I can share this feeling with others. If I got a...

The last time you and I spoke, you tried so hard to make me understand. I know now you loved me then... but I blew it away. I believe I have been a bit stubborn, its quite possible my thickness has gotten the best of my mind on this one. These years that have passed, expectantly acting casual...

i am looking for a rip poem for my mom that passed away that isnt to long or too short ne help?

There you sit Day by day Wallowing in yourself afflicted misery The one that cared for based on his better judgment No longer with us And your now disputed and broken family Looking to you Their mother For some answers Knowledge Truth Yet there you remain Sitting or laying Indistinctly...

POEMS by C.S. Scotkin Poems are new love in the night or muted cries of children’s fright. Golden eagles soaring light. Or weakness overcoming might. A poem is summer heat that wilts or winter freeze when axis tilts. And green grass shacks built up on stilts, or dashing knights with hands on...

I wrote this poem for American Idol Contestant Danny Gokey and I just want to know what you think and if I should give it to him. I'm only 14 so i'm still improving in my writing: Silent breath in prayer.. Reaching for dreams, wind blowing passion everywhere... Giving it away to reach to...