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This is a poem I wrote about the victims of 9/11. I'm thinking of publishing it and would like feedback regarding it's strong/weak points..... "The Burning Ledge Beyond My Grasp" This inescapable air, pulls at my flailing hair, riding speeds so...

I wish I was enough, enough for you to see that there’s light in every corner though it’s hard to believe. I wish I was enough, enough to fill the hole so that when you heart is breaking I can play the fixing role. I wish I was enough enough despite the rain constant showers might get you down...

i wrote this in like a minute. be rude if you must, idc. Torture I feel it, tearing up my heart Trying to kill me. Why can’t you see that I hate it? Just stop already. You say you like me, how can I tell? You treat other girls better than me. I’m the one you should want to show and tell Your...

i wrote this in like a minute. be rude if you must, idc. Torture I feel it, tearing up my heart Trying to kill me. Why can’t you see that I hate it? Just stop already. You say you like me, how can I tell? You treat other girls better than me. I’m the one you should want to show and tell Your...

Can anyone give me the complete poem from "Kino's Journey - Land of Prophecy" ? I can't seem to find it anywhere. And I would like to add the rather long poem to my collection. "The poem of sadness" from the anime "Kino's Journey" Episode 3 - Land of Prophecy. Please, help me out.-^_^-

please thanks hahaha

Okay, so I'm a total nerd and hats off to anyone who can guess what this is based on. It's embarrassing though. *fanfic alert* I'll grow out of it, I'm sure. It's a more traditional style poem than what I'm used to, but I wrote it a year ago or so, and I hadn't found my 'flair', so to speak...

Whats the conflict, and characters in "The Listeners". By walter de la mare

I remember it was about a man (maybe a hunter?) who finds this (mythical?) beast and he was describing it and in awe of it. I also remember the creature as being lion-esque and the book was illustrated. In one picture I remember the man standing afar off and the beast was next to a waterfall...

Found this poem I had forgotten I'd written Stuff the snakes Snakes can be deadly when your on a treadly. Be they taipan or king brown. Death adders and asps All have fangs to bring you down. Why would I want to stuff one Let alone stuff it for my wall? With snakes in my dreams Far too close...

and then some help.? Ode to Peter Benoit...needs a different poem title and a revised introduction. If any one wishes to cut it up and patch it back together, add/subtract, go ahead...I am no poet, I appreciate reading the works of others.I only stumbled into this catagory, I put research and...

poem and it were very nice.? put it back so others can read it also.

I need a 15-25 liner funny poem about chemistry subject or its scientists. Please help!!

a. the joy of a childhood b.the beauty of the sea c. love and death d. infifelity

English or Filipino. Please write ALSO the title

death/funeral bells? I'm looking for something he wrote about how when a young girl gets married, it is as though she is dying.

i tried looking for it but i cant find it

Copper copper on the chest am I the baddest copper ever lived

Just a short one i can write into a card

11/3/2009 Looking back at my day I feel like going back And change it every way I had the worst of luck Beyond any description I would say Time is running out Nothing to be happy about No one can hear my shout No one to help me out I need an urgent delay The dead line is so close I have loads...