how close the hour
of my love lost
longing for your power
at my hearts cost
please hold my love
close to your mind
a whispers loud shove
from words so unkind
i overlook the pain
the sadness in my eyes
when all i have is you to gain
so plesae ignore my cries- leia
Hi, I need some help as my boss has asked the whole restaurant staff to come up with a up selling poem and the best one gets a prize, I have never done a poem in my life so any tips are more than welcome or if any one could do one for me that would be great. The funnier the better.
I wrote that poem and I wish you tell me what you think of it
excellent
good
just ok
weak
anything else?
ok here's the poem
Sorrowfully sits and sorrowfully weeps
Can't get what her soul needs
Her heart sorrowfully beats and bleeds
Could the reason be her bad deeds?
Will this never cease?
Oh...
well its not the funniest but its funny to me
its off courage the cowardly dog
"Ya got big ears butcha I aint hearin meh!! I said ...."
yeah im a big kid?:)anyways...how about u guys n gals
I wrote this last night after i watched dawn of the dead it gave me inspiration but i dont know if its good enough its for a girl in my school she is well fit i like her a lot do you think she will like it and please also give me some feetback thank you
Her face, she looks at me
Her eyes, they...
please could someone help me i need to analyse this poem and explain the imagery and language used.
So you think its Stephen?
Then I'd best make sure
Be on the safe side as it were.
Ah, theres been a mistake. The hair
you see, its black, now Stephens fair ...
Whats that? The explosion?
Of...
what poem goes "dreams are dreams and thats why dreams are worth having around?"?
theres a poem or book that I'm trying to find out the name of and who does it. it goes:
Yes there are places in the world where dreams are almost dead, so please my child do keep in mind before you go to bed, to...
It is a poem story and it is a little dark... but i wrote it in aid of a friend who is now out of a situation which once controlled her life...
Cut Me Loose
Every night I lie awake, hands clasped over my ears,
Head buried in my pillow, to stifle my tears.
Shut my eyes, Sqeeze them tight...
Dear Obama, racial novelty and social trauma,
from whence in Asia hast thou came?
With both a Muslim and Asian last name.
How did the ladder of success you scale?
While for a white too dark,
and for a black too pale?
To mingle with men named Bush and Gotti,
you must be the product of the Illuminati.
i need it within 2 days! make your own or get the idea from a poem. please help me! this is very urgent! look at what i did please help me continue
Math is being hated by many
But come to think of it
If you’ll study
It would surely be easy
It has 4 basic operations
Addition subtraction...
While Hester Prynne was a fictional character, imagine what might have happened if Anne Bradstreet had been an observer of Hester's public shame. Put yourself in Bradstreet's shoes and write a poem in response to Hester's story.
Your poem must meet the following requirements:
•one use of...
A Walk through a Thought.
There is no certain knowledge of my passing
Where i have walked in woodland after dark..
just the crushed pine needles who knew my step,
Just the withered bough where i knelt to rest...
The imprint in the snowflakes that once held a flower
And the memories of many...
I have never been much good at writing poetry I am a novelist aspiring anyway. Give me your honest opinion without being too brutal. Thanks. - Cass
ENDLESS LOVE
ENDLESS LOVE
Hands clasped together for the very last time
Sitting...