Something about this sounds... clunky? I'm not sure how to rewrite it, though. Any help would be really appreciated. Thanks!
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You are unique. You are talented. You have a bright future ahead of you.
Whenever you start to think those depressing thoughts, just remember...
Here is the link:
http://www.contiki.com/destinations/europe/tours/108-european-contrasts
I just think its way too many countries and you only spend one day nearly in each country?!?! I want to go to Europe for 5 weeks but at least spend a few days in each country. Any help or thoughts? better...
We have been planning a trip in May since December. Basically we have promised to take our 10 year old niece to an amusement park in Orlando if she passed all subjects in school, (she is struggling in school right now). The child's mother is a single parent on a tight budget and no car so they...
I remember watching a preview of it a year ago, and lately I've been seeing it come up on tumblr, but I don't know the title of it.
Its pretty much revolving around a zombie who thinks normally? and wears a red sweater, and its like a world of zombies or something like that
Hello all, I am doing some research for my stats class and need to collect some data, could you guys help me by taking this survey? It shouldn't take too long, Please help :)
One lucky answer-er will win best answer at random.
here is the link:
http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/2Z6LJZW
Thank you!
i have to write a short story for a class and i need a few topic suggestions.
i have a couple of ideas:
-girl moving to london
-guy who hallucinates an adventure
-set in 14th century england a boy witnesses a murder
i just need help with conflict and plot etc. or any other suggestion topics :)
Hi guys. I am a 15 year old girl who loves to write and read. I was wondering if someone could please please edit these two sections for me. They both from different scene so yeah. I have also given a little background on each part like what's happening so you have an idea what I'm talking...
It can be a yes or no, just please answer
If i do mountain climbers, pushups, and 1 ab exercise(i think its called bicycles). Can i lose weight and gain muscle if i also include like 2 bench press a week? I only have a small, tiny bit of fat covering my wannabe abs.
Even the best laid plans are one misstep away from falling apart.
For Javier Vazquez, those plans were to impress while pitching for Puerto Rico in the World Baseball Classic, and then hopefully latch on with a major league team as a result. Unfortunately, all it took was one twist of his...
A lot has been said about Obama, some right, some completely off, but there seems to be a lot of contradiction and confusion among you guys.
A. One post will say Obama is the dumbest, stupidest, most inept President in history.
B. Another post will say that Obama is a deceptive, calculating...
She fumbled through her pockets fishing out only ashes of what seemed to be tissues. She looked miserably at the breaking tissues and swallowed back self-pity disconcertingly. 'Well miss? That would be dollars', the impatient shop assisstant snapped.
Perspiration formed all over Mary's...
This is a rough draft. It is going to be scored based on content, so please tell me if I should add or delete anything. Also, it is not for school or a grade, so don't tell me to do my homework by myself... Don't say anything about grammer because I will have it all fixed later. & tell me which...
This is a rough draft. It is going to be scored based on content, so please tell me if I should add or delete anything. Also, it is not for school or a grade, so don't tell me to do my homework by myself... Don't say anything about grammer because I will have it all fixed later. & tell me which...
Examples (and my personal favs that I can think of as of now) : Cowboy Bebop, Samurai Champloo, Steins Gate, etc.
I don't really care what genre as long as its really good and worth watching.
Revenge sure looks good on Taylor Swift! The single 23-year-old singer stunned at the NRJ Music Awards held at Palais des Festivals on Saturday in Cannes, France—the same event...
I am going to try a short beef recipe that is braised..
It's kinda like Osso Bucco with a few more ingredients, At the end it says to Strain all the braising liquid and then reduce it.... That's suppposed to make a thick gravy.
What If I instead process the sauce so you can't really see the...