Here is the first part. It's in rough draft form. I wrote it this morning:
For those who remembered the television series, “Spartan Hall” – known during its first season as “It Happened at Spartan Hall” before its name was shortened – about the goings-on of students at Lakeview High...
The hero in his automated space ship is being chased by the bad guy in his. The chase continues for 50,000 years.
The story was written several decades ago. Ever heard of it?
Jenny Ross was a fan of vampires and vampire medias that she practically idolized them as gods; dreaming of her ideal Vampire man as sensitive, dominate, aggressive and angelic-looking, watching her at night to protect her and feel safe. But alas, Jenny's parents begin to think she's deluded...
I am writing my story from third person limited.. I find it difficult to jump into action.. I want to use chapter 1 to set up for chapter 2.. Sort of an introduction, but I don't want it to be boring..
Any tips?
Seventeen year old Levardis Thomas thought he could make a clean getaway. He decided to rob a local department store. He walked in and pulled a gun on the cashier. "Hand me the money". The nervous cashier handed him the money. He took 1,000 dollars and put it in a bag. He quickly ran out of the...
"Oblivious" was the adjective we used to describe the actions of the couple in that crying young Rangers fan video that went viral on Thursday.
It was a good choice, too, because that couple is now saying they're guilty as charged when it comes to not being aware of their surroundings. After...
I'm only barely surviving. Hardly hanging on anymore.
Where are you, where did you go? I refuse to believe that you're gone. You can't be gone.
I'm so used to having you with me and I never imagined you'd leave, never imagined you could do something like this.Am I praying? You always did act...
I have an idea for a story with a role reversal on the "guy doesn't call girl after sex" idea. Here's my premise:
A guy meets a girl from school he hasn't seen in a while and he's started to be attracted to. They get reacquainted through a mutual friend but one night while at a club the girl...
someone didnt have money for the operation and a tv station paid for the operation on condition that it could show it live with no anesthetic... does anyone remember this story?
I'm writing a story, and I want to know what you guys think of the first chapter.
Here it is:
http://www.wattpad.com/4012436-the-perfect-attitude-chapter-1
By the way, I'm not advertising or anything, I just want to know your opinion. (:
...semen? i want to make the killer do something strange in a non sexual way with his sperm to show how weird he is. would this be too much of a turn off to readers or would it really show how messed up and crazy the guy is? i'm trying for something like silence of the lambs, but not eating anything
The plot is basically about this girl, who lives within a race of humanoids, who look like humans but are all beautiful, smart, fast, strong, and agile. I was thinking about calling them "Unnaturals". The main character's father's always wanted her to become a soldier (soldiers hunt humans...
Its about a poor 'family' that live in the city of Chicago in the early 2000s. There was Cyprian Parson, a poor musician and occult researcher from England; Justina Walker, a Charity schoolteacher currently unemployed; Simon, a 15 year-old illiterate pickpocket and handy with a switchblade...
I know the series has already ended and the next season comes out this November. I was just wondering when the dvd will come out for season 1 this year in Australia. I can't wait ;D xox
Welcome to Blisstree's Reproductive Health Week! Everything from birth control, health insurance coverage, and abortion debates have been keeping women's health in the spotlight in the past few weeks, and it's made us (and Rachel Maddow) realize that there are some serious holes in everyone's...
i need help writing a story using figurative language about a man being chained to a cliff and having his liver eaten everyday by vultures
even just a metaphor would help
I'm writing a story about a man in a nursing home, but trying to present it as a jail. Can anyone think of any ways to start it? Or any parallels between the two environments? Any help would be appreciated.
opening passage: 'i'd like to report a murder'
orientation: police station
problem: unknown
climax: shoots person
resolution: the murder is the witness
what can i do for my problem? im only meant to have 2 characters and one setting? please help my creative brain has gone to sleep
Just some general feedback, like:
1) Do you feel it interesting (honestly), yes or no?
2) Plot development, too much or too little?
3) Character/Background information, too much or too little?
4)Feedback on writing style (includes imagery, sentence structure, etc.)
Under the beaming lights of...
So I was going to make a story on two teenagers put into a institute
For example a mental institute
And in the end they run away together and are finally happy but I have no idea how to start the story or what could happen between the beginning and end please help