Can anyone proofread the poem translated from Chinese?

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Hurry, honey! hold firm mommy's hands

——dadicated to the children who lost their lives in earthquake

by anonymous Tanslated by Ahjie

Hurry, honey.

Hold firm mommy's hands

The road to heaven is drak.

Mommy is worried:

you might bump you head

Hurry, honey.

Hold firm mommy's hands

I'll be with u.

Mommy!

I am scared

of the road to heaven

I can see no more

your gentle lid.



Honey.

Go on

no more sadness

no more textbooks

no more daddy's urges

Don't forget:

mummy and daddy's look

---- We will still be with u next life.
 
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