Can u rate this rap...imma rookie...plz gimme feedback though..whether bad or good?

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Uh, i'm jus so confused ,struggling not to lose/
jus tryna keep my cool/
even when gased up, feels like im losing fuel/
cuz im playin fairly while my crew is breaking rules/
so, im steady tryna fix em, witout my freaking tools/
and all these wanna be rappers hoping on the gangsta rap/
most of that ish is wack, so be creative n lead ur pack/
grew up wit scraps, no money or change/
but the lord is gonna pave a way so i neva complained/
and i kno i ain't no rapper, more like a snacker/
feedin off this hate, using it up then throwing it out like a condom wrapper/
there's no throwing me out, u will need me/
cuz my bars will have u spinning in circles like a cd/
ya'll cant step 2 me, ain't none of ya'll that can c me/
im gone/
 
"...ain't no rapper, more like a snacker/feedin off this hate..." tight dude, i give it 7.5.
 
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