Does this story sound good? Any suggestions?

[simitenniscoach]

I'm on my dad's account here is my plot:
-A rebel, trouble girl moves to a religious city in Texas, falls in love with a boy who treats her right and as things progress in their relationship his family starts to dislike the girl and so do the boys gal friends plus all of his friends want to do her which is never a plus.

 

[AbbeyDoo]

I kind of like it. Email me the story if it gets going.

 

[ValentineMontgomery]

Why am I supposed to care about this plot?