Have a listen, i want some feedback on my music !! i wanna send it to record

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Personally I like it. It's really soft and kind of relaxing in a way?
I mean, yes some tweaks and some improvements could be made, but I think you have potential :)
 
companys so please have a listen? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sjJo72alF4g

this is a song i wrote and recorded at home
i want to get a record deal, and im trying to see if its what the public consider good

no nasty comments, construcive critism please,

would you buy it if it was released and recorded fully??
 
It's alright, the guitar has too much treble and the guitar playing is decent at best, the vocal tracks ate a bit too quite, and the lyrics are a bit generic. You need a bit of improvement.
 
Go for it! I would buy it. Get a reverbnation account. Add me if you do, I'm Emotion Falling. :) I think you've got talent.
 
i think you go for the stress in your voice too early in my opinion this both sounds wierd and takes away from when the stress is necessary. seriously mate i think you should have a listen to this guy and you will learn alot http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c21SfaAwBw0
 
Yes as a musician with years of experience it is pretty good and would sound even better in a recording studio don't forget that! and you have to give it a shot because you have to try if you don't you might regret it for the rest of your life, since you see those people like the Jonas Brothers and Justin Bieber that don't deserve to be there, I think you are better (or at least have the potential to be better ).

I also have a youtube music channel by the way www.youtube.com/themankh
 
Personally no, I would not. I hated the phrasing you used, and the guitar quality was terrible. Your voice is lacking some drive in this recording. It isn't properly recorded for me to be able to give a real opinion as you can blame the terrible recording quality for your voice, guitar etc... but if it was properly recorded I still wouldn't like it. Not a song I could ever imagine listening to, it doesn't have anything going for it for my taste.
Sorry, but I'm being honest
 
Go for it! I would buy it. Get a reverbnation account. Add me if you do, I'm Emotion Falling. :) I think you've got talent.
 
wow your pretty good, yeah i'd buy it off itunes:) good luck with everything xxx
 
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