Its my love poem i wrote, its the first time i ever wrote a poem so its not perfect, i would like your ideas, not enouh emotion at the start etc,,,
When we first met, I felt overjoyed,
i discovered a compassionate human who
understands me and who will always be
there for me. When i knew i was inlove,
it was like feeling , hole, i finally felt
like the empty part in my life vanished,
because i knew even if i admitted my
feeling to you, you would never leave me,
and if it would not work out, we would
talk it out.Now, I am truly happy, i
have no regrets, i feel completely hole,
i am no longer depressed by far, i feel
as if i am as light as a feather. When
we are together, i feel as if the hole
world is singing a joyful song, and
everything in nature is together again.
When we are apart, i feel as if the world
is moving to slowly, i cant get you out of
my mind because you are the one reason i
even care about getting up, because i
always know at the end of it, i will talk
to you for hours, That makes my day
.
i feel like our love will last an eternity.
When we first met, I felt overjoyed,
i discovered a compassionate human who
understands me and who will always be
there for me. When i knew i was inlove,
it was like feeling , hole, i finally felt
like the empty part in my life vanished,
because i knew even if i admitted my
feeling to you, you would never leave me,
and if it would not work out, we would
talk it out.Now, I am truly happy, i
have no regrets, i feel completely hole,
i am no longer depressed by far, i feel
as if i am as light as a feather. When
we are together, i feel as if the hole
world is singing a joyful song, and
everything in nature is together again.
When we are apart, i feel as if the world
is moving to slowly, i cant get you out of
my mind because you are the one reason i
even care about getting up, because i
always know at the end of it, i will talk
to you for hours, That makes my day
.i feel like our love will last an eternity.