i need desperate feedback for my storyline development. (Sci-fi) please read.?

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Future-Force is set in the late future around the year 202,705. The saga starts with Zane Tyler meeting a robot and telling him of an evil masterminds plans to eliminate the galactic government and conqure the new galaxy for his own. But when a more deadly plot assembles underneath, Zane and "Glitch" are going to need to meet with a team of investigative scientists from the other side of the Breegus galaxy and team up to defeat and stop the evil Hypermites.

this is just a blurb for the back of the game box.
dont like it? dont be a smart arse and save the webspace and dont post anything.
POSITIVE FEEDBACK WOULD BE APRECIATED. if their is anything i could add, please tell me!
please be creative and think of outcomes for the hypermites, and Zane etc...
 
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